My Writing

Monday, November 29, 2010

Greta Gerwig cried onscreen and it seemed real

I like faces close up
and words that
come slow

Showers
and sunlight
and wet eyes feel good

Why has it been so long since I
played my trumpet?

May I blast a high note in your room?

7 comments:

  1. i agree with minscoe, i like this a lot

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  2. you can blast a high note in my room any time babes.

    p.s. this is a nice poem :)

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  3. greta gerwig is mentioned twice [not by name] in this article http://noisandarewhatwho.blogspot.com/2010/12/50-directors-50-films-50-descriptive.html

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